Black Poetry : A Treasure (Eisha)

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  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You who was once only a seed
    Have blossom into a Rose
    That speaks a tone
    Carrying self-esteem
    That makes me proud of thee

    I had to learn
    How to best care for a treasure
    A special blessing from above

    To do my best
    To grow with you
    Inventing better ways to teach you

    In preparing you for the world
    That is outside our doors
    Wow the day came sooner
    Then expected time do move on

    I know I said these things many times
    So bear with me as I say them again

    Let your instinct guide you
    Because your eyes
    Sometimes will deceive you…
    And it oks to be afraid of new things

    It’s your caution mobile
    Kicking into gear
    And I laugh because I said it again

    Lift your voice to the sky
    Hold on to your insight
    Enjoy life
    Enjoy living
    Enjoy them Carefully

    Remember
    You are a Queen to be
    You are special part of me
    And when in doubt please do ask
    I’ll help you the best I can
    If there are question
    I can’t answer
    Together we’ll
    Fine the answer

    There is more I want to say
    But I want you to feel the rest from my heart

    You are loved
    You are special
    You are indeed
    A God Bless Treasure

    Peace and love
    Mother
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awesome scribe sis...very deep and heartfelt there is nothing as mommas

    love and support i really feel this vibe.... very nice flowing.....Angel
     
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    Any daughter would treasure such a scribe from her mom, and I'm sure Eisha does. Very endearing Blue, very....
     
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    :heart: Thank you. :) Put a big smile on my face. i have blossomed beautifully. Tears falling. Feel so special. A million blessings from your daughter, Eisha. Bluewater, my mother, you write from the soul beautifully. :heart:
     
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    so beautiful i just love when u drop it bring warmth so motherly !!
    i love this heart felt piece
     
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    aww this was so beautifulll...sis


    in that to have a person with such a guidance by youre side,,


    that is a blessing it self.....



    this ....


    this here ..


    is what i missed ..


    in my mom...when i mist her when she wasnt there...




    thank you for this beautifull writting :smooch: lady..






    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for sharing your love and your thoughts on my flow..

    Peace and love to you all
    BlueWater :heart:
     
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    re: hi

    good-afternoon Bluewater ,


    just roaming around the board and cheking out poems...



    just beautiful as i can picture your daughter smiling at this time... indeed all kids share a special bond with thy mother, as without her there would be no me or you... still this piece is more, as it's like you are letting go of EISHA... letting her embark on a new journey under the guidance of thy LORD... do print this out and frame it, as it has touched me dearly also...


    have a nice day...


    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much Mr.Africa
    you are indeed on point ..:)
    i just wanted to put to script
    of the thoughts of my little one
    and to remind her that she is a
    wonderful treasure of love
    Thank you once again for the love

    Blue :hearts2:
     
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    A timeless, beautiful inspiration!
     
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