Black Poetry : A Touch

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Apr 23, 2005.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A touch that doesn't
    cease completely
    A comforting hug
    that embraces so sweetly
    The blanketing entity that tucks me
    into bed at night
    The stroke of midnight that drifts
    into my dreams until daylight
    The first few notes of a favorite
    ballad erupting joyful tears
    I've known you for but a moment yet
    our spirits have conversed for years
    spoken in ways that only the two of us
    and God understands and hears
    the whys and wherefores that can't
    thoroughly be explained
    No matter, just experience it
    and realize how much has been gained
    from
    a touch
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deeply felt very nicely done sis.......
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you could feel the vibe Rich, thank you brotha.
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just the slightest touch from your hand
    put a brutha in that mystical dream land
    as the hour glass is emptied of its sand
    a poetic piece that the poets can understand.

    Sista Watz on point once again. Thanx for sharing.
     
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    You have no idea how inspirational this is right now, girl:

    I've known you for but a moment yet
    our spirits have conversed for years


    Beautiful stuff here.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And thank you Godssoulja for that sweet flow. Appreciated much brotha.
    Happy to know those words were inspirational gempis. Thank you kindly sista.
     
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