Quiet Poetry Lounge : A Touch of Erotica

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ShadeeLadee, Jun 1, 2002.

  1. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~for my mentors :) ~

    I laid his head in my lap
    face down and the heat
    of his breath singed the
    tiny hairs on my thighs

    I knew it was dangerous
    I knew we were
    much too much in lust
    and my freakish flights of fantasy
    have always been far too
    unreliable to trust

    But I wanted him from his eyelids
    to his chin, I wanted him buried
    in the folds of my warm skin

    And so I sat very still in the chair
    as he greedily inhalded my essence
    down there

    SWT
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we need to talk...

    MMA
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    don't tell on me !!.......
    really dis was most deep and from the lust
    of his head the warm air is the passion of
    ya tenderness soon u shell wiggle
     
  4. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    ooooooooooooh girlfriend

    *in the voice of jj from good times*

    get down get down get dowwwwwwn :lol:

    very clear and vivid

    excellent written piece my dear :)

    pd
     
  5. PloeMorphic

    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cool

    poem was deep. very nice
     
  6. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hear ya girlfriend! that's what i'm talking about. that's whassup! :) very well put together. nice flow.

    Kim
     
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