Black Poetry : A touch from a man

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  1. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A touch from a man
    you raised me,I trusted you.
    never did I think you would do me like that
    every time the family would leave
    in my room you come to touch me

    A touch from a man
    I don't remember when you started
    but you always told me that you love me so I thought it was o.k.

    A touch from a man
    who broke my family a part
    I told mommy and it broke her heart
    Daddy, i forgive you for what you done
    but never again will I be the one
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :(
    nice drop
    feeling the sincererity
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    herat felt from the mental point of touching something so pure
    breaking the mold is deep and heart felt express on let it all out !
     
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    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *speechless* let a tear drop... ur pen touched my soul
     
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    This is very touching. A heart breaking reality of something that happens in families. Thanks for writing this and sharing. Keep flowing your insights.
     
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    i hate it that children have to deal with such issues...smh
    heartfelt scribe sis...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Poppa touched her so I put my 9 in his mouth
    I made him lean back as his dirty soul went south
    I gave him 16 shots to da dome
    from my chrome nickle plated microphone
    I put poppa to sleep
    no tears will I weep
    Who sheed tears 4 a creep who stole the innocients between young sheets
    I'm saying I live a code of the streets
    packing mad heat
    my brother i do keep
    flamers that do speak
    Big @zz words with hollow point teeth
    Poppa touched my little angel yes daddys princess who is sweet
    I did what I had to do so I rocked him to sleep!

    Don't creep with this daddy's little girl because I am her keeper! :teach:

    Nice poem my sister.
     
  8. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    python thank you very much for expressing your likes to this piece thank you all :luvu: i gain alot of sister and brother since i join and more than that friends
     
  9. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are welcome, your poem just sparked my flame my sister so I thank you as well. :spinstar:
     
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    It's crazy how so many of us had to go though something like that with a family member, but what don't killer of will make us stronger, so I wish you the best. I felt every bit of what you was talking about.

    Very nice piece,

    Fade,
     
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