Black Poetry : A Tomgue of Love

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A chocolate Star drop from Space
    Its rays did in deed shine my face
    Its light was wisdom of words
    My eyes are now free from the absurd

    What shall be the Objection?
    Just what is thy direction?
    From Below to the Above
    My heart is just a tongue of love.

    And from Isis almighty lips
    Palm hands being on her hips
    I wait for justice not just this
    I dream of a solar eclipse

    So please be my love horn
    Not thorns being nothing but scorn
    I want sexual braids full of corns
    It reaping time,
    Light the fireplace because its on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like the heart and soul are ready...this was lyrically wonderful.
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    did someone turn up the heat...

    this was a passionate piece
    I held on to each stanza...
    especially the last two...

    And from Isis almighty lips
    Palm hands being on her hips
    I wait for justice not just this
    I dream of a solar eclipse

    So please be my love horn
    Not thorns being nothing but scorn
    I want sexual braids full of corns
    It reaping time,
    Light the fireplace because its on
     
  4. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mmm.. this piece has me wanting
    to gather up some firewood and
    I don't even have a fireplace.
    It's on indeed...
    Beautiful and sincere flow... :read:

    Much Peace,
    Akilah :spinstar:
     
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