Black Poetry : A thief....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It’s a thief
    Took my heart and wrapped it
    Sweet whisperin sounds
    Took and drain the life out of it…
    It’s a thief ..
    Open my heart and
    Destroyed it…
    Livin by his words..
    Mine so lost couldn’t
    Believe it was
    A thief …
    Makin me cry
    Holla
    And scream
    It’s a thief ….
    Took control…
    Didn’t know
    What happen …
    Dusk ta dawn woo my heart…
    It’s a thief in here…
    Dayum I let him in….
    Came quick…
    Just like a thief slippin in
    In the night……
    Now my heart
    Pours like
    a waterfall…
    a thief slip in…
    Sadness lurks in
    All of its corners…
    At times I don’t
    Know what ta do
    Or even handle
    What I feel…
    My days are long
    My night even longer…
    I let a thief in…..

    blkangel thang...:kiss:
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was tyte. And I truly feel ya......it was off tha chainz how you expressed yourself with this one. I loved tha vibez. BEWARE OF THAT THIEF....... HE'S OUT AND BEFORE YOU KNOW IT HE"S GONNA GET YOU. I loved this. Gurl.....dang......you got them skillz. What else can I say but that was wonderful. Flow on'.

    Much luv,
    foxy.........
     
  3. angelicsage

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    oooh, girl...been here
    lol, except he wasn't a thief
    I gave it to him...but believe
    me sister...it felt the same
    tyte flow
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    foxylady30315...girl he just came in..like he was the world
    had me all in a daze..i thought he was real..but a thief...is what he was..thanks for the read.....

    angelicsage...thanks for the read...got a new bow who takes care of me...and he aint no thief....glad ya like the read...much love...
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whaaat!! this was a worthy mzblkangel piece/peace for real :)
    especially that last line...whoa! :)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    triniti424..lol glad you like it....and thats what he was...
     
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    oooooooooooooooo! feelin this like my own underwear. girl, I hear ya loud and even louder. :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!!
    now dis speaks out clear
     
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    All of the corners of you taken by a thief. Heart police.. arrest the man. Take back your day and nights.
     
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    feelin' this very much...much love
     
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