Black Poetry : A Thank You

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I never thought while going through all that I did
    I would be able to feel happy again.
    Felt doomed to isolation deep inside myself
    To lock out all feelings until all wounds healed.
    I never thought that one day I would happen
    Upon a pearl in an oyster.
    Finding you was serendipity in the flesh
    Knowing you for a life time as a fixture,
    A painting I would pass and sometimes admire.
    And that one day the connection made that this
    was more than beautiful art, that you were more
    than the Mona Lisa on display you were
    My remedy
    My muse
    My cause to breath
    IN
    OUT
    and look forward to another day.
    So thank you for filling my lungs with air
    My heart with love ,
    and my arms with you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhh!
    the depth and beauty of this feeling
    got me all mushy and stuff
    i can vision it all right now
     
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    You make me smile with my heart $$$R$$$ :blush:
     
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    likewise as my heart smiles back feeling
    your every emotion................................
     
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    my sistah, i was feelin the luv and emotion in this drop
    but i am steal healin frum hurt and one day i will feel like wut u jus said in this poem
    very nice writtin
    so flo on wit nonstop

    blackluv and bp
     
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    Heal on it will be ok there is always a brighter day after the storm.
    Thanks for the love.
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    but my sistah stormz cum day after day, leavin my skyz gray
    how do u expect me 2 see the glow of the sun
    but i feel ya, AND MY BRIGHTER DAYZ ARE YET 2 CUM

    BLACKLUVA AND BP
     
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