Black Poetry : A Textbook description of love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j holla, Oct 25, 2004.

  1. j holla

    j holla New Member MEMBER

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    First of all lil girl
    you don't know how I love
    you've never met my embrace;
    hell, you ain't even been introduced to a verbal push or shove from me.

    I call you "lil" cuz that's your mind frame size
    plus your dress size that you squeezin over extra medium thighs
    and your range of perception on real life is BET....
    oh I bet you'd love to be a video *** on the set huh?

    But...I've diverted from my point...
    you don't know how I love
    How I make a Queen feel like it all day
    constant little reminders of my feelings always...

    and that's just a little on the love tip "lil" girl,
    as you try to pull your skirt down where it won't;
    turn your non-existant top into a classy blouse
    change your hairdo from greasy to Nice 'n' Easy....

    Let me get into the love-making aspect
    when I use ice on her neck it makes more than collarbones wet
    and i mean more than one wet, whetting her appetite
    her thirst to be cared for and loved; Lover's Delight.

    You, "lil" girl, can never be on the level she is
    not sayin' u ain't fly to someone's eye, whoever he is;
    but I'm looking for someone that's grounded
    proffessional and classy in the street, and a freak beneath the sheets

    You don't know how I love
    how many times must I tell you?
    I'm not a hater cuz I don't feel you
    and naw I ain't gay cuz I don't look your way.

    This ain't the radio, you don't have to give me no play
    and no, you don't remind me of Lisa Raye
    Your strut doesn't make me have illusions of stickin'
    matter fact, you lookin real bird-like, head of a chicken...

    Who I love is irrelevant, especially to you
    those who know is who recieve, they know how I do.
    I've spent enough time talking, got to get back to who I speak of
    Got to go give her a reminder...of how I love.
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi:wave: and Welcome to the family :heart:
    oh how you do love :)
    you brought it real in a smooth text poet
    liking this :)

    Blue:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee,com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of love and sharing
    welcome from above as i bless u some love

    happy u join us in flow this was tyte write
    look to read more of u soon keep flowing & sharing :hiya:
    :hi: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:

    do hope you decide or consider on a membership here at destee's
    to enjoy the full features and benefits as a PREMIUM MEMBER and
    be suportive to a loving community look at what u missing out on !!
    http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=26882
    again welcome to the family :juggle:
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You've given the lesson, perhaps now she can understand. Strong flow my brotha, enjoyed the poetic flow in chapter and verse, welcome to Destee.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello and welcome to destee.com
    tight drop...enjoyed your flow
    looking for more....

    Also come join us in chat
    bless us with your poetry
    or just come chill awhile
    www.blackvoicechat.com

    Peace
    Angel
     
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