Quiet Poetry Lounge : A Tender Diversion

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need a tender diversion
    and so I think of you
    gently stroking my hair
    in the delicate way that you do
    slowly massaging my brow
    making me calm and at ease
    this is so relaxing
    don't stop touching me please
    my aura is now afloat
    on a summer's breeze
    whisking through the sky
    amid the leaves in the trees
    soaring feathery soft
    like birds in flight
    soaking up the sun during the day
    basking in the moonlight at night
    the wind chimes dance
    as I glide through the air
    all my worries subside
    it's as though I'm without a care
    while I'm under your spell
    my mind can take me any where
    it's true
    I need a tender diversion
    and that diversion is you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just like tender love so sweet
    tyte flow sis.........whewwww!
     
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    Glad to know you felt the sweetness here Rich, thank you for your kind words poet.
     
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    u had me feeling like i was floating... loved this one
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    allright sister..
    sweetly rhyming flow..
    and a wonderful innocence within those rhymes..
    thanks....for sharing...another facet
     
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    Thank you for saying so daroc, that was the feeling I tried to convey.
    Glad you felt the carefree innocence of this scribe, oh, if it could be this way in reality. Thank you deepy.
     
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    The whole poem seemed like a personification of WIND! Ill drop. Really feeling the rhyme scheme and the effect of that the addressee had on the speaker. Loving this one, peaces
     
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    Thank you define, for letting me know how this scribe affected you. Much appreciated.
     
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    You know that light airy fluff
    in the middle of a freshely
    baked biscuit?
    So perfectly baked to perfection!

    Reading you here has left me
    feeling so light, airy, and free!

    The imagery is all that!
    Loving your drop Sister!!!!!!

    BTW, if anyone thinks
    that I must be hungry,
    I'll cut 'em!!!!LOL
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, no, I wouldn't say that you are hungry, Purplemoons....Thank you for saying that this scribe made you feel light and airy, like the inside of a biscuit(I liked that comparison). :)
     
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