Black Poetry : A TEACHER TILLED

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  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :teach: A TEACHER



    A timeless teacher taught things Thoth Tehutti might have known
    Since starting this season, stimulated, my mind has grown

    Gardening green grassy grounds of my growing mind
    Sprouts were planted and pruned so lush fruits would be mine


    Fertilizer fell feeding my new found freedom
    And silence stood in shadows waiting for words to lead him

    Where once wilted words were worn on withered pages
    Now sprang roses singing scented songs to all ages


    Pick this potted paper of planted and pruned possibilities
    Watered with wine of writers old wineries


    Let it sit on the window sill so near to thy shining soul
    And forever feast in this fragrant flower from fields of gold




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  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    i felt at piece reading this scribe....
    very nice poet...
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. caramelpython

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    A Calm expression and style. Nicely done! :teach:
     
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    Everything comes alive when brought in the right light. The imagery here was beautiful, flowed nicely with the message.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very smoothly pose'd and cascade deep in my soul
    softly wow !!!!
     
  6. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankx family
     
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    very smooth n calm read enjoyed this
     
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