Black Poetry : A Tale Of Two

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  1. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A TALE OF TWO


    It was love at first site
    between us two
    but we didn't know
    we slept through the truth

    searchin for love
    in someone else's arms
    only hidden glances
    we admired in the heart

    secret wishing was the
    constant thought
    in quiet nights I dream

    that you would come
    to claim my heart
    and make me your
    only Queen

    as time went on
    fate stepped forward
    changed our direction
    and love entered in

    falling in love
    we found something new
    something in each other
    that complimented two

    from there......

    we were inseparable
    best friends in every way
    my life would seem
    incomparable without you
    day to day

    in matrimony we shared
    the blessings from above
    the symbol of our rings
    a circle of unending love


    Epiphany(c)2001
     
  2. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Epiphany

    Your tale of two was absolutely beautiful...

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very good read!!!!!!!!!!
     
  4. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Windwalker.....

    I appreciate your read, it means a lot.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas.......

    Thanks so much reas, I'm glad you enjoyed.
    Nothing like spending 20 years with your soul mate.
    It inspires beautiful poetry on love.

    Epiphany :love: :heart:
     
  6. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GIRL , YOU GOT IT!

    The scriptures tell us that a man who finds a wife
    finds a good thing.
    I would add that you have been blessed also!
    may your blessings continue just like ya flo!
    peace and:love:
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Epiphany,

    This heah poem.....rings with truth.
    A perfect picture of true love. You and my dear brother inlaw are blessed to have found a love that lasted so long and remains strong. I have witness the love of a true King and Queen. May God continue blessing you both.:heart:

    p.s whispers, even after all the dirt I told him :laugh:

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Epiphany

    this was sweet like a gem
    the love in tune of two
    him and u ......just beautiful:heart:
     
  9. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Epip

    many times two people can love each other for a long time or for a lifetime..
    but the lucky people can stay "in love" for a long time or for a life time..

    a sweet love story...

    K
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let me write a play about this love tale. i'm sick of Romeo and Juliett.

    congrats to you both and keep the flame lit.
     
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