Black Poetry : a sunday poem (1/20/02)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Giovanni, Jan 25, 2002.

  1. Giovanni

    Giovanni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    from a date with a beautiful sista' on the 20th of January 2002..
    "a sunday poem":

    I fell into your eyes,
    hangin' from your smile like a child
    on park swings; my feet miss'd the earth
    several times that night.
     
  2. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *sigh*
    that is so sweet!
    oooh i love sweet love poems!!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    this is...

    sooooo what I'm talkin bout! :)

    thank you for this exquisite portrait of the simple pleasures...

    a
     
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    good.

    and beautifully stated in so few words.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she all dat, eh!!!

    she gotta sistah.

    delicate peace.
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Giovanni...

    All I can say is WOW...what a pretty Sunday poem. Beautiful eyes combined with a beautiful smile...so very potent, ain it.
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Giovanni

    Nice ... Nice ...

    I feel you on this! Short & sweet :)


    N2
     
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