Black Poetry : A Sunday kind of Love...

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This morning I woke up to individual
    beams of iridescent sunlight kissing each
    of my pores.
    My smoked honey complexion sparkles momentarily.
    I catch a glimpse of myself in the mirror...
    beautiful!
    peaceful!
    I smile and the world seems much brighter.
    I gaze at the empty spot in my bed;
    my mind wonders.
    Hmmmmmmmmm what I wouldn't give to have this
    spot filled.
    Lord, I would love to wake up to the
    love and attractiveness of
    A Sunday kind of Love.
    Billie Holiday riffs smoothly in my background...
    smoothly egging on the direction of my thoughts.

    The delicious feel of a warm form
    melded into mine...
    The soft feather-light kisses in the dark...
    A hand in mine and mine in a hand...
    The feeling of security washed over by pure love...
    Ahhhhh A Sunday kind of Love.

    The kind that would leave me with a certain
    'Ahh' feeling in the pit of my stomach.
    The kind that would distract me deeply
    every time I latched onto their exotic scent.
    The kind that would embrace my spirit; extracting
    half-and-half mentalities and breeding
    spiritual and physical 'oneness,' 'completeness'
    realities.

    ****! Just the pure excitement and effervescence of
    having someone that I can belong to
    and who belongs to me.
    That special other of my Libra-tic scale
    that is the pearl in my silver-clam shell.
    Just lying under the blue hued expanse of the sky
    on a clear and poetic present day,
    getting high off of abstract images and
    esoteric thoughts of that wonderful
    Sunday kind of Love.

    **2005 I-K.o.N*
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew...Who wouldn't want that kind of paradise next to them each morning. Your words were so feathery and genuine. Great feel....perfect to read on a Sunday morning poet.
     
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    I agree...

    This is soothing. A mental massage.

    Nice.
     
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    outstanding drop what a splash this was flow on
     
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    Poet....Oh...dearest poet...

    How I LOVE what you do with words...
    and how effortlessly you plant them
    into the spirit of your reader...
    like a gardner...you then begin to water
    the images with the essence of your gift
    until there's an eden of beauty...
    winding like ivy around our imagination...

    mmm...this was smooth
    Sage
     
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    SoothinDivinity Active Member MEMBER

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    Wow!

    That was such a great way to convey such a desire. Makin me want a Sunday kinda love too....keep doin your thang.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo I gotta thank you so much for your love and support? I appreciate the love so much so so so much.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much for the love and support!!!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much for your love and the words you always give to me. You are simply wonderful!!!!!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sage you are truly a blessing.
    I love you dearly mami. I can't express this enough.
    God bless you!!!! You are truly a blessing in so many ways.
     
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