Black Poetry : A Summer's Moon

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    full moons of summer
    round and bright
    a single, powerful provider of light
    making its way through bedroom windows
    helping lovers see
    on a hot summer's night

    sweat covered bodies
    reflect the moonlight's glow
    ninety-five degree secrets
    a summer moon surely knows

    it circles the room
    moving by the ceiling fan breeze
    the eyes of lovers adjust to the hue
    on their backs
    on their knees
    atmosphere so essential
    as lovers try to please

    summer moon
    making me hot
    making me high
    awesome its affect
    against a black summer sky

    a summer moon
    perfectly playing its illuminating role
    so comforting as I close my eyes
    knowing it will do its thing
    until time forces its way
    and daylignt arrives

    BE
    (c) 2002


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  2. poeticdelight

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    Summer Moon Summer Moon

    :D

    those moon beams are quite radiant aren't they? :lol:

    nice flow

    pd
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Be

    why did I feel like a peepin Tom??????





    One
     
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    be...quite nyce.
     
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    On point as usual Heartbeat!!

    tyte flow my brutha!! Feelin it fa sho!! :toast:
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Poets. Maby it's this heat but the moon has been awesome lately. Zorb...cuzunozee thas why :)

    BE
     
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    mr b.


    the title caught my eye... & the read...
    well... this heah peace... it just "felt" good! :)
    thank you for sharing, poet.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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