Black Poetry : A strong woman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by naujae, Feb 18, 2005.

  1. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm a strong woman needing a strong man
    enough cent to be able to understand
    how important it is to love me from the inside and out
    the one that have to freak my body right
    lay me down but not to sleep
    in the mirror you take a peek
    to see how our body formed
    whipp cream, cherries, and and that yum yum honey
    spreaded on your tummy
    as i lick it off your eyes get wided
    because i slideing down to shift your gears
    in mouth your full of tears
    all in all with this freak that strong man
    got a lot to deal with if he's messing with me
    I may be small but i'm very strong
    signing off a strong woman in need :whip:
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great poem Naujae

    A strong woman in need.
    All her love for her man.
    Without a doubt.

    Must please his woman inside out.
    From day first, she is his number one.
    Loving a strong woman is the ultimate charm.

    For he will find her fascinating.
    Pleasing and attractive.
    Fighting everyday for her love there after.

    Get in the ring and fight for your love.
    Love like this is a gift from above.

    It comes to you maybe once may be twice.
    Spend your time in the moment or the rest of one’s life.
    Open eyes see the truth.

    It would be tragic when you loose.
    If you fall short of pleasure there is pain.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop sis,
    you always add a little flavor
     
  4. certainty

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    knowing is

    a heart full of scarlet flowers
    is a strong woman's heart

    your poem says
    you know who you are

    which is so much more than so many know these days -
    including myself

    it is good to read the strength in your lines.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I hear a strong woman speaking
    for the love of a understanding man
    tyte drop !
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol welcome back sista nauje

    I was with you till that whip came out LOL

    gurllllllll LOL
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    naujae

    Nice drop. :D

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts of me...oops...I mean...he for whom you desire. :D

    :toast:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected] ...and Trin, knock it off ...
    I done seen a lot of :whip: in ya hand, what was you doing with it? hahahaaaaaa

    Very nice piece...but ummm I'm not sure if "strong" is the right one you're looking for :haha: some strong vibes in here that ain't got nothing to do with strong ...lol
     
  9. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nasty...I likes. :tongue: Cool poem strong woman.
     
  10. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank to all that enjoyed the flow i haven't left yall just work on couple of piece to bring to the table
     
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