Black Poetry : A Stranger's Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Apr 9, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We met as the moonlight began its dominance of the sky
    Our greeting almost speechless
    Our interest spoken by the look in our eyes

    Two bodies searching for mates in the night
    Two hearts longing for love that doesn’t have to be right
    The need for each other was confirmed on sight

    The atmosphere uneasy finding appropriate words to say
    Such is the atmosphere of strangers seeking intimacy
    Can it really be any other way?

    Not knowing each other’s demons or baggage from the past
    A stranger’s love is uninhibited, beautifully new, excitingly fast
    Yet, a stranger’s love is never meant to last

    Perhaps it is less than a passing affair
    When done, its meaning quickly put aside
    But so pleasingly raw is the physical honesty
    A stranger’s love is sure to provide

    BE
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya poetical playa!!!!

    This love sometimes is hella complete - but only sometimes fa a quick minute...

    Dig this flow!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  3. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ,
    Thank you kind sir.
    BE
     
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    You aint never lied!! You can get so HIGH in that initial stage that it becomes like a drug...
    Funny though...
    cause some of us get addicted to it...

    tyght scribe sis...

    8th!
     
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    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    You know this one takes me back to the daze when I first enjoyed your penned emotions. You are thoughtful, and thought-provoking. It is no wonder you stay so blessed among scribes, among men.

    Thank you for posting this one again. It reminds me of from whence I've come. Thanks to you, and yourz! :wink:

    Much love for you

    T :heart:
     
  6. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Poets. So much is learned and appreciated from those known and unknown. The process never ends.

    BE
     
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    strangers in heat...

    takes me back to those barroom/pickup days when so much was said and done in that initial meeting...when harmones raged and love was fleeting...the next day when it was time to get up...you looked to your right and said, "what the [email protected]?"

    THANKS BE.

    peace.
     
  8. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like

    the level of expectation your piece give me
    nice stuff
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel ya nice write poet
    Peace
    Angel
     
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