Black Poetry : A Storm is Brewing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Stormcloud, Nov 19, 2012.

  1. Stormcloud

    Stormcloud Member MEMBER

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    Coming into my own

    Fulfilling destiny

    Its now time for me

    To continue

    The legacy

    Blowing in

    Stronger than

    Katrina

    Or Sandy

    Nothing can stand

    Because

    The storm that I bring has been brewing for ages

    Moving across global lines

    Gaining power

    That is designed

    To cause everything to come to a halt

    Board up your windows

    And run to your basements

    Better yet

    Get out of town

    Because there is a storm coming

    and that storm is me
     
  2. Caramel de leche

    Caramel de leche Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol: Glad this is just a poem. For a minute I thought another Hurricane was comming.

    Very Nice!
     
  3. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow Stormcloud...do what u do man.
     
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    I really thought about that too sis.:lol:
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Awww, sooky-sooky, now!

    I see you keepin' tha family "flow" going' too! :toast:

    *2 snaps and a neck roll, yall!* (lol)
     
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    Thank you. I am humbled by all the comments from poets I have been reading for years...Thank you Uncle for the gift you and dad nurtured in me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    enjoyed the twist of the storm....very nice flow
     
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