Black Poetry : a storm is brewing...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Jun 26, 2003.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is a storm brewing
    In the east

    Brooding clouds beg the release of
    Pent up teardrops

    They fall…
    Searing the seer seeking relief

    There is no relief
    …No escape from the
    Pending doom

    The storm hits…

    Tsunamis …
    Composed of angry tears
    Pound the coastal shores of
    Stability
    As
    Sensitivity
    Gives
    Way
    To
    Impenitence

    Rivers of Rage overflow
    Running down the canyon of Hostility
    Producing mudslides of
    Vengeance
    That floods the valley of
    Serenity
    ‘Til…
    Happily
    Love gets up and
    Walk
    Away.

    Quiet Calm
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a wonderful piece, so well written with such creativity and rhythm.
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm so feelin' this piece.
    tyte flow, Baller.
     
  4. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow... i like the way u said it n set it up.
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was excellent, loved the creative flow and word play!!! keep expressing yourself your flow is awesome......

    AqueenPassing
    :wave:
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful scribe brutha ............tyteeeeeeeeee!
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooo wooooosh :yo:

    whoosja...i feld the movement of the poem..

    like this....

    much love liberty
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...feeling the vibes..nice flow...yeah there is movement here
    Peace
     
  9. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there is a storm brewing
    one calamity after another
    and another
    'til a brutha
    be drowning in misery.
    needing company
    but wanting no one to feel what he could see
    as lightning flashed and thunder roared
    'til the storm screamed no more

    THANK YOU...for responding
     
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