Black Poetry : A Stitch in Time

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  1. Sefirot

    Sefirot Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All seven of me is that which exists
    Between matter and energy
    The inner me which pervades my extremities
    And escapes into outer space to reenter me
    That which I can call upon
    To fall upon the selfish
    I walk with jeans sagging as if beltless
    144,000 among the helpless
    While those with less than help
    Choose top shelf liquor among the shelfless,
    I vibrate
    From heat, light, magnetism,
    Electricity and attraction
    I open doors that cause rarefaction
    So a spare fraction of the helpless also vibrate
    The rate of which is boundless
    With soundless pitch, I cast my stitch in time
    And shine light divine
    Through this temporary shell
    Stranded in but not of this temporary hell

    Wadu
     
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    :terrific: nice piece...
     
  3. river

    river Watch Her Flow MEMBER

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    There is more overstanding in you than you know, brotha, Sefirot
     
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    Awesome piece poet..^5
     
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    I agree!! .
     
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    Sefirot Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll get it together eventually, In'sh Allah. Your words are very encouraging.
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YES MY BRATHA I WAZ FEELIN YO FLO
    U MADE TRUE STATEMENTS IN DIS PIECE
    SO FLO ON WIT NONSTOP
    FRUM YO SISTAH G.A


    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    As Salaam Alaikum......

    A powerful write, indeed Brother Sefirot. Keep on flowin the way you do. I likes :spinstar:

    Peace
     
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    Brother, your cognitive state of awareness need not be questioned.

    You're on course... Vibe-on ~
     
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    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flo was tyte fo sho!
    One love