Poetry Critiques : A spiritual experience

moham

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Ok ..once again but slightly different now.
It's just a different learning process every time.
unfinished


Earth child- a spiritual experience


I’m sexy
Not raunchy
Growing to be kind and forgiving
Not fake

I am an earth child.

Sometimes
I am shy and polite
Essentially
I respect, all of Earth’s creatures
all of Earth’s love,
Her divinity
Her power
Her mistakes.

Now you see
Sometimes I am childish.
A child on earth
playful
I really see no essential difference
and no harm.

Maybe
I am free
Powerful,
or love.

On this journey of the spirit
I am through multiple stages

A caretaker, a keeper, a woman
a peacemaker
a queen, a mother, a sister,
a lover, a sinner.

An earth child.
 
Poet...

You have writer's block because you want to force it. You should always let it come to you. I don't mean to be gross here. But, it's like holding pee until you reach the bathroom/restroom. When you get there, it's still difficult to let it go although you want to go so badly. Just relax...and it will flow. :D
 

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