Poetry Critiques : A spiritual experience

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by moham, Oct 25, 2006.

  1. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok ..once again but slightly different now.
    It's just a different learning process every time.
    unfinished


    Earth child- a spiritual experience


    I’m sexy
    Not raunchy
    Growing to be kind and forgiving
    Not fake

    I am an earth child.

    Sometimes
    I am shy and polite
    Essentially
    I respect, all of Earth’s creatures
    all of Earth’s love,
    Her divinity
    Her power
    Her mistakes.

    Now you see
    Sometimes I am childish.
    A child on earth
    playful
    I really see no essential difference
    and no harm.

    Maybe
    I am free
    Powerful,
    or love.

    On this journey of the spirit
    I am through multiple stages

    A caretaker, a keeper, a woman
    a peacemaker
    a queen, a mother, a sister,
    a lover, a sinner.

    An earth child.
     
  2. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right now, I'm crawling up a black hole (for those who care).
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I mean a writer's block, a poet's block, a creative block...whatever you want to call it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice spiritual splat !!

    worry not the block will remove itself keep writing
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Poet...

    You have writer's block because you want to force it. You should always let it come to you. I don't mean to be gross here. But, it's like holding pee until you reach the bathroom/restroom. When you get there, it's still difficult to let it go although you want to go so badly. Just relax...and it will flow. :D
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks man!
    I really appreciate your words...
    and I know what you mean,
     
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