Quiet Poetry Lounge : A Soul darken by misery(message)

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  1. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A soul darken by misery,
    a dark child that has sadden in her eyes and in her soul,
    She feels meaningless to the world by whom who’ve hurt her,
    by betrayal
    They have scar her soul with the unforgettable pain,
    her pain has replay able memories filled
    with tears that neva leaves.
    The pain she feels is permanent,
    so she crys inside and out from the stings and burses the pain
    has infected her with,
    a deadly virious that has no cure,
    words and comfort could tan it but could not control
    or destroy it.
    Poor baby gurl was lost in thoughts.
    Her poor motha tries to help and understand her,
    to her mother she’s like a unsolved puzzle with missing pieces
    that seems to neva be found. She knows her daughta is falling apart and it hurts her to see all of this taking place,
    and she can not help her no matta how much she tries,
    her motha’s love wasn’t enough. Her motha feels distance
    from her heart and soul, she feels she’s losing her daughta
    in a battle with the devil trying to take her daughta souls,
    the devil is sucking in her childs joy.
    Every time she trys to talk to her child,
    the girl strikes back with uncontrollable anger,
    its hard for her motha to get a word in for her daughta to listen,
    her child is stubborn in a helpless way. The motha is getting tired of the depression that her child endures,
    the motha tells her that she undastands becuz she has been through the similar things, but not as quite,
    but deep down inside her motha doesn’t really understand,
    she only think she does,
    the motha doesn’t realize shes telling her daughta the wrong words,
    her child trys to tell her motha that’s not it,
    that’s not whats wrong, that’s not
    why I feel this way! But her motha tells her to shut up,
    becuz she thinks she’s right,
    her motha wasn’t completely listening long enough, not close enough to predict, now that was the sad part.
    The girl gets frustrated from her mother
    always thinking that she is right wen she is wrong, shes gets stressed out weh her friends tell her that something is always wrong with her,
    that shes always complaining. So who can this girl really talk to wen something is heavy on her mind that
    she needs to releast out of her mind? Wen this gurl was yung, her mouth was always shut,
    and her words were always silent,
    becuz her thoughts and pain was kept to her self,
    and no one knew what was wrong with her.
    And now she has started to open up,
    but people act like they don’t wanna hear it even
    though they have asked so many times before.
    Now every time she tells them whats bothering her,
    they tell her she has no reason to feel that way,
    to be that way,
    they say she’s complaining and that
    theres always something wrong with her.
    So the girl leaves home to get stuff off of her mind.
    Three hours past and her motha returns
    home and she doesn’t sees her daughta no whurr,
    than she finds a note on the computer desk,
    it wrote bye and I love you in big letters,
    the motha touches her chest and hesitate
    to call the cops, she goes out to search for her daughta,
    and she still doesn’t find her,
    so 3hrs lata the motha finally calls the cop.
    Than a week lata the cops call
    back with depressing news,
    they tell the childs motha and
    say they found her daughtas body in the bushes next to a lake,
    that was her daughtas secret place,
    after that her motha gets weak in the
    knees and breaks down and cry
    and depressing song out of tears
    . The cops say she died from dehydration,
    but her motha knew that she died from a
    painful soul that wasn’t saved in time,
    her daughta soul was neva healed from the hurt.
    A year lata her motha started to have
    deep flashbacks about the moments
    she had with her daughta,
    she thought about the time her daughta
    told her that the pain was too much,
    and it hurted so bad mentally,
    she told her motha that she didn’t understand.
    So the motha wiped one tear and touched
    her aching heart and spoke softly to herself,
    saying “ you were right baby, I didn’t understand,
    I’m so sorry baby,
    please forgive me.

    The message of this story was to encourage people
    and parents to listen closely to their children when
    they have a problem, don’t try to predict right away whats wrong,
    just listen and let them talk.​
     
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    so often this seem to be over looked in a child eyes
    sadly one have to be lost before thy parent open their eyes & ears
    deep truth spoken here.
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stankz rick 4 comin thrugh and readin dis long behine write, i appreciated, dis story was mostly about me in many wayz...


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    feelin every bit of it and seen this happen to many
     
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    im glad dat u feelin err bit of dis pieces, and i hope dis dont happen 2 those i kno...lawd bless


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