Black Poetry : A Song To My Girl To Be

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  1. MacGeo

    MacGeo Active Member MEMBER

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    A SONG TO MY GIRL TO BE

    Every step and every move i search;
    Searching for the love that seams lost;
    Yes,i can feel some day i'll find;
    Be it hidden in the valleys of mississippi,
    Even in the coasts of Miami,i'll find;

    Though it may lay hidden by the stars above;
    Not even the waters of the great atlantic can hide;
    Nor the sky-mountains of the Evarest;
    Or even the British ilse of Europe;
    I know i will find'n the world will see;

    I feel the wind blow as she glides majestically;
    Hey;girl just a minute,give me one second;
    OOh,,just one second to pour out my mind;
    Baby,to let you know how much i care;
    Angel,you always send me crazy;

    Each time i set my eyes on you,
    I feel a beam of light streaming down in me;
    Like a beam of the sun rise in a gloomy weather;
    Girl;You are the queen of the summer Roses;
    A special designer shaped thee i imagine;

    A designer not found in the heavens above;
    Not even to talk about the world below;
    At worst she smiles, ooh..those smiles again;
    Smiles which send my soul flying;
    And drives my heart pumping'n burning;

    In darkness i walloped and galloped all my life;
    God said,let there be you, 'n all was light;
    You're the missing link of my destiny;
    I can see the edge of the world,Girl;
    'Cause the pain of loneliness i know no more;

    There's none like you in this world,
    I'll give you everything you desire,i promise;
    None can be to you like me,i say none;
    Just open your heart to me baby girl;
    And i'll shine on you like the morning sun;

    Your pains of the worldly torments'll be mine;
    I know many have failled you but i'm different;
    STOP it now,she shouts out crying;
    OOh stop it now,to hell with it;

    I'm tired of that song,it's music to me,she says;
    My ears pain each time i listen to it;
    I feel sick when i hear it,**** it now;
    Please, just take away this music from me;
    Sing to me another song, 'Cause this i know;

    It's just another song of lies and deception;
    The song that time has proven wrong;
    OOh, the song of disappointment and fustration;
    The wounds and blisters still lay in my heart;
    Just no more singing and preaching,Lord no more;

    Girl,it's a special song for a special you;
    Listen carefully 'n you'll find a sweet melody;
    It's the music of reality,ooh the reality of love;
    The love that cometh from the bottom of my heart;
    Yes,i'll keep singing this song till you un'stand;

    OOh girl, except you teach me another song;
    A song of your life and destiny;
    You seeth not your face except with a mirror;
    I am your mirror,the mirror of your life;
    Look into my eyes and you'll see the truth about you,

    Baby girl,detest not me,ooh dare not;
    'Cause i've got no flashy cars to pull along;
    But a flashy brain i've got,where wisdom is stored;
    Yeah,wisdom the powerhouse of all wealth and riches;
    Come to me girl and we'll together be great;

    After every great man comes a great woman;
    I pray thee to take the crown of this great woman now;
    This is the message in my song, a special one;
    For the one i care,the queen of my heart to be;
    Two minds and hearts that think'n beat together as one.

    written by MacGeo
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey MacGeo
    wow this is so beautiful
    loving
    the words of the hearts
    you have compose
    in this flow:heart:
    Peace
     
  3. blackchynadoll

    blackchynadoll Member MEMBER

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    Beautifiul
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was sweet
    ya wordz seep out like candy
    and leave a taste sweet
    ya flow is on hit keep flowin'
    very nice scribe ......
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww...a song about ME?!?! :) lol
    this was beautiful :)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was soo sweet:) :heart: Simply Beautiful
     
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    "God said,let there be you, 'n all was light;
    You're the missing link of my destiny"

    Truly beautiful!!!
     
  8. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Since I don't do love poems myself I usually avoid reading them but I am real glad that I read this one, it is awsome and I enjoyed the read.
     
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