Black Poetry : A Song for Vonn

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  1. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a song for Vonn
    Ahem ~
    ‘You’re Beautiful’
    I gotta give respect
    Where respect is due
    I try to put into perspective
    What I owe to you
    Love, trust,
    My friendship pure
    And true
    I know I’ve neva seen
    Your physical
    But that’s important to
    Who?
    That doesn’t change what you’ve
    Been to me
    When we connect like
    Modem’s do…
    Sometimes I think
    You hold my smile
    And when you think time is due
    Though you can’t take the pain
    Away
    You gradually make brighter
    My shade of blue
    ‘You’re Beautiful’
    The way you
    Just “do you”
    And when you know I got stress
    Send me kisses for my mental
    I swear if you look up friend
    In the dictionary
    There would be picture of you
    Half nappy,
    Smilin happy wit suthern lingo
    And a gold toof
    See, I had a smile for you
    Hope im as much as a friend to you
    May this hea will show you
    That im uhh-muse-d by you
    *don’t steal dat…lol
    Bet you neva thought you’d
    See the day that I would
    Sing to you…
    This is a song for Vonn
    ‘You’re Beautiful’

    2 da 2nd Power
    Reas
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!

    This is sooooo special!!!!!!!!! I heard this from the intro (that "ahem" was toooo cute!)....to the last verse! It is truly wonderful finding that bright ray of light in our otherwise drab worlds....through modems....fibre optics.....screens....poetry.... because our insides are exposed more openly and the beauty we find is pure....not marred by what the physical eyes can see! (skin is sooo deceptive)

    I'm rambling, but I know you feel me. This is a wonderful testimony to the way lasting friendships are made. (from the inside-out!)

    say it Reason!

    a
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wind Beneath My Poetic Wings...


    ...simply put... this was too sweet!

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
  4. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet words about the qualities that make a real friendship...
    seeing with the heart and not the eyes....I liked this one..

    K
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ohhhh you shouldn't have

    This is a song for Gary
    "Ahem"
    Us met on Afronet
    You and I
    I think it was "69 Ways"
    In which you said hi
    Months and months
    As we've burned up
    Telephone lines
    You let me hold your pain
    One day...
    You said "I need to talk to you"
    I told you I was here
    You called and I listened
    Now many moons later
    We like two peas in a pod
    Our relationship has gone
    Through many changes
    From needing to talk
    To calling me"FRIEND"
    "Ahem"
    This is a song for Gary
    A strong black man
    I look foward to ya calls
    The laughter we share
    If you can't reach me verbally
    You know I'm always here
    Plenty kisses for ya mental
    Memba that spida???
    That was classic
    I'll be here when you need me
    10000000000% no strings attached
    Stay strong brotha

    UbZoRbShUn
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas,

    This is a wonderful piece. It proves that what's underneath is truly what's most important. We are able to disguise our outter appearence. It is our hearts and souls, that reveals who we sincerely are.

    Madd Sistahly Love:heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man this was extremely

    B~E~A~U~T~I~F~U~L.........IN MOTION
    POET WRITE FROM DA HEART !!WOW!:eek:
     
  8. sexe1

    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OMG

    This is totally sweet...
    A true freindship is hard to
    find...so continue to stay
    in it and happy!
     
  9. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Yawl!

    Thanks for readin fa real! I appreciate the love.

    Back at cha!
    Reas
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    quite nyce, dear poet.
     
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