Black Poetry : A song for Lamont.

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here I stand arms open
    wide.
    Ready to accept you hold
    you love you.
    It never really mattered to me
    all the things that happened.
    You are so much more than
    I could ever hope for.
    I feel the pain
    and want to wipe your
    tears. I want to rub you
    back and quell your fears.
    Don't feel the need to
    hide behind
    you macho veneer.
    I am here because I love
    you and always will.
    Come into my arms
    and let me show
    you.
    You are safe in my love.
    If you ever question how
    deep it runs look
    into my eyes and
    see the pools of
    emotion that wait
    just for you.
    Step into my heart
    and feel secure.
    Because you my love
    are always welcome into
    my arms.
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice piece, LAMONT is ONE LUCKY BRO
     
  3. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All I know is that he is someone very special who deserves all the love he can handle. I just want to extend a little love from my big ole' heart and hope it finds the right target.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats all we can do sometimes , sista nice drop, Keep em coming, feeling your style
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely pose'd and lucky him
     
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    :spinn: :wave: :grouphug:

    Nicely said, Sista. From one whose heart is sometimes bigger than her chest, I can relate. Keep doing what you're doing, and share that with him if you haven't already. Blessings to you both.
     
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    very nicely posed
    likes this
    Peace and good luck
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wish I could be a fly on the wall when you share this piece with him. lol...But, really there's just an honest feeling of sincerity in this lovely scribe.
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well hopefully he will have a chance to hear my heart and understand that no matter what I am here for him. Miss my friend that's all.
     
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    this was truly
    a sweet dediction
    love hath no measure...

    Beautifully scribed
     
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