Black Poetry : A SNAKE SHE IS

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  1. MacGeo

    MacGeo Active Member MEMBER

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    A SNAKE SHE IS

    On the sea shore i lay;
    Watching the waves play;
    As they hit the walls of the cliff;
    And swing back to the sandy beach;

    Ooh, a perfect reply, i thought;
    As the ripple gave a to-n-fro;
    The concrete walls of my mind it hit;
    Now the gentle breeze sweeps across me;

    And like an opium it sleepens me;
    As though in adream i see her;
    Oooh,like a moon walker she glides;
    And as a magician she whinds her waist;

    Cuz more toys she needs;
    OOh more toys to plays with;
    Away she flies cuz a worthless toy i am;
    cuz she got another, yes another play thing;

    But yesterday sweet melodies she sang;
    The melodies of flatter and death;
    Now tha iam broke;
    Away she flies like a butterfly;

    For the bills i can't pay nomore;
    OOOh for flashy cars i got none;
    But for my good friend of all times;
    Like a christmas gift;

    She got him in her arms;
    And those melodies again she sings;
    But snake girl she is;
    For fresh blood and nutrients she sucks;

    And lives you dying with the toxic vernom;
    But my friend,little does he now;
    Yes before dawn the willhe know;
    Then my choir will he join;

    So that togther we can shear;
    To sing the sad melody of dispair;
    A snake girl i my life;
    My story aloneit was;

    And now our story it is;
    Tomorrow it may be yours;
    watcout friends.
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    i already met her son....
    she was talkin bout ish...
    so i broke camp after i hit....lol

    for real though...this was heartfelt...
    it's a shame...like moni love used to say
    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i know her so well
    she been in my yard too...
    flow on i feel ya
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was deep
    thight scribe
    likes the way it was posed
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It takes all people to make a world, hopefully you'll sidestep this kind the next time around. Liked the way you posed this.
     
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    rE TO :MACGEO

    YOUr poem is a true warning for all to heed
    I have seen this snake and been bitten indeed
    Though her vennom did course thru my veins
    I walk away with out very much strain
    I wish I had your words in my brain
    Your warning would have song in my brain its refrain
    A SNAKE SHE IS SHE ONLY OUT LOOOKING FOR GAIN!




     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We live and learn...
    sometimes for the worse
    Snake girl...Snake boy...
    Snake personalities...
    Gotta watch out for them
    but trust...once you've met
    one...you won't be deceived again.

    True flow...
     
  8. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    I agree with Sister Sage.

    You told this story well, though, for all those who haven't met her or him yet.

    Well, you tried to tell 'em, anyway! (lol)




    And :birthday:
     
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