Black Poetry : A SNAKE IN THE GARDEN???????????

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  1. NINI69

    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A SNAKE IN THE GARDEN?
    I WISH I COULD SAY WHEN
    I HEARD I WAS SURPRISED
    WHEN I STARTED I REALIZED
    THAT THEFT WAS POSSIBILITY
    BUT I BECAME LAX IGNORING FACTS
    DUE TO INSPIRATIONAL MOBILITY
    CONTAINED WITHIN THIS SITE
    WORDS BUBBLE OVER AND I MIGHT
    HAVE BEEN TEMPTED ON OCCASION
    TO SHARE MORE WHEN I LIASE WITH
    MY DESTEE FAMILY MEMBERS
    THOUGHTS RETURNED TO SENDER
    DUE TO SKEPTICISM WHERE IS THE WISDOM
    IN GIVING MY SOUL AWAY
    ALL IT TAKES IS THAT ONE DAY
    AS THE SNAKE SLITHERED INTO THE GARDEN
    PROFUSE GROWTH AND PROLIFERATION
    LEFT US SUBJECT TO HATERATION
    IN THE GUISE OF LOVE AND ASSISTANCE
    CUNNING ATTEMPTS OVERCOMING RESISTANCE
    HE IS NOT THE ONLY ONE
    TO COME LIKE A THIEF IN THE NIGHT
    TRYIN TO STEAL MY JOY IS LIKE
    A TRANSGRESSION OF THE HIGHEST ORDER
    IF U USED YOUR POWERS FOR GOOD MORE
    GOOD WOULD COME TO YOU
    WHY TRY TO BREAK DOWN A SISTER
    WITH TANGIBLE PROOF
    OF POSITIVITY OVERFLOWING
    BEEN THERE HERSELF AND SHE'S KNOWING
    THE NEED TO COME TOGETHER AND BREATHE
    SHARING WHAT I WRITE IS ESSENTIAL TO ME
    THERE WAS A SNAKE IN THE GARDEN
    CONCEIVED AND CONTINUING IN SIN
    WHY DOES IT HAVE TO BE US AND THEM
    ALLERGIC TO PEACEFUL COEXISTENCE
    EVEN IN CASE A SNAKE REPENTS
    U GOT TO ASK YOURSELF FROM WHENCE
    HE COME IN THY STRAIGHT PATH
    NOT EVEN KNOWING HALF THE VALUE
    HALF THE TRUTH
    I CUT MY FIRST POETIC TOOTH
    ON THE BACK OF DREAMS DEFERRED
    THERE IS REAL POWER IN WORDS
    LIFTING US UP TO FLY FREE LIKE BIRDS
    THERE IS POWER IN MY WORDS
    PEACE!

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  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    cross da land
    of beauty
    the garden of truth
    thou snake captured
    head from body
    not to raddle
    poetic justice lay
    in power hour after hour
    love bond unto da family
    feel da power of words
    all snakes will be cruved
    slithered into da trap
    sin in a snap
    yet a theft can bend & hide
    try to steal at any will
    but not where true faith & love
    reside
    no return
    no chance
    snake was cut by our handz

    feel u here as i water the garden
    feel the sunshine now
    the beautiful garden of growth continue
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and your POWER is more than felt...it's heard.
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am really feeling this
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "WHY DOES IT HAVE TO BE US AND THEM
    ALLERGIC TO PEACEFUL COEXISTENCE"

    Powerful, montain movin' truth...
    Satan, get behind me!
     
  6. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amen and say it again...

    They say when you rebuke Satan he will flee...perhaps the same thing works with the snake...Just in case I brought my hammer and my rake!:court: :court: :court: :court: :court: :court:

    Long live Destee and the snake is now a purse!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    Thanx for putting a voice
    to my own concerns.
    We are surely known by
    our own fruit...
    God bless!
     
  8. NINI69

    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FAMILY................

    DUE TO PERSONAL CONCERNS AND ISSUES I AM JUST NOW LOGGING BACK ON. I WANT TO SAY THANK YOU TO THOSE WHO READ AND CONTINUE TO READ ME. I NEEDED TO GET THIS OFF OF MY CHEST. PEACE!
     
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