Black Poetry : ~~~~~~ A Sip of Silence ~~~~~~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Jun 9, 2004.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes this tells a story within
    as words run in sweet tunes
    more then one's not heard
    loving this drop and flava
    taste good flow on !!!
     
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    this was tight
    i was like in this
    got to the end
    lookin fo more
    very well posed
    but you already
    know that sis....:wink:
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Yes!

    Smiles to you Sage... :)
    Thanks for this needed moment
    Of times that could be.
    :heart:
    Much love to you, sister.
     
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    sage, this was so tight! The way that you play with the words makes me feel as if I have a front seat in seeing this. Very nice:)
     
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    Hey sis loved the way you played with theese words, This is yet another Sage 4 ya mind joints. Good work poet. :jumping:
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmm Sage what do you do to me? I can't explain it but this captures exactly how I dream of an encounter with the lady I love. You have this knack for dipping into the surreal and within someone's soul and pulling forth a treasure trove of sheer lyrical beauty. Much love to my darling.
     
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    BOOM!!! This really makes the point, sister. I too believe it's the things that go unsaid - in all aspects of life - that have the greatest impact. This was masterfully laid down, as usual. :heart:
     
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    :star: :star: :star: Love the way you kept your secrets with your suttle play on words...kinda personal huh?...I Know the feeling quite well sista gurl...keep up the good work..."poet"..keep up the good work :star: :star: :star:
     
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    Talk about a special moment in time...what an interlude you described....romantically posed, thanks for this, sage.
     
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