Spoken Word : A Simple Note

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Legendof_1_Spirit, Mar 1, 2002.

  1. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...>fades in>

    Hello everyone. Thought I might drop in and check things out over here. This poem is a little old. I posted it in the poetry forum several months back. But it is short and goes by really quick and I thought it would be a good poem to submit here. Although personally I don't like my voice, I also thought that some of you would like to hear it spoken. So here it is, in my voice.

    <fades out<...
     
  2. Hunter

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    So nice to finally meet you tongue to cheek so to speak

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    Very nice.
    Do you accept request? :)

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    hello Legend! Welcome to this side of the house. Where you know you belong.

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice glad ya spoken up ......loved it brutha
     
  6. Legendof_1_Spirit

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    Nice to meet U too, Hunter. I hope everything is going well for and with U.

    Requests, Coco? That all depends on what type of request, and if it is within my power.

    Thanks for the welcome Alyce. I really like it here! But I think I may just take a backseat and just listen to the various rhythms here.

    Thanks, Rich, glad I spoke up too. Sometimes being silent is a pain.

    Well thanks everyone for the giving me an ear and responding.

    <fades out silently<...
     
  7. Nia Maishani

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    Legend.....

    You may be so BOLD and DARING, if I have anything to do with it.

    Wow.....this vibe is HIGH VOLTAGE
     
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    Legend.


    ...well dayum!!

    (& that is strict-ly for the content of the piece! :D
    it was like... well... just Dayum!!)

    oh! i liked the voice too! :wink:

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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