Black Poetry : A Simple Note

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  1. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    <post-it note>

    If I may be so bold and daring as to jot down my thoughts when I think of you it would begin with...

    A simple wish to steal a kiss
    That I may wear the taste of you
    upon my lips
    And brand your essence into my tongue
    So, when I smile, the world would see
    U N me and know we are one
    And the woman sitting next to me would
    be envious
    Because her man does not crave her
    The way I crave you
    Starving and hungry
    For your touch
    That I may clothe my body within
    the feel of you
    Drown within steamy strokes of pure affection
    Die into an afterlife of shivers
    Spawn by your simple caress
    If I could only dress myself
    In your lips, your voice, your eyes
    Your delicate form chiseled from divine perfection
    Then I would hunger nevermore
    And consider myself forever blessed...
    To be yours...

    And I am very bold and daring to post this note here...in order to stimulate your mind and spice up your day...

    Legendof_1_Spirit

    <end of note>
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Ohhhhhhh Boy Legendof_1_Spirit !!!!

    I'm certainly all spiced up after reading this!

    Spiced for the night, I'll marinate till morning.

    very very nice

    glad to see you back on the page.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spirit

    "That I may clothe my body within the feel of you"..what a beautiful line...
    this piece speaks sensuality...

    K
     
  4. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew!...Legend...

    My head was spinning on this one........Thats some powerful
    thoughts......beautifully written.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Lover man

    lover man do yo thang!!:toast:
     
  6. sexe1

    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my...this is sweet.
    Really sweet...I could
    only pray for a man to
    crave me like that...
     
  7. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    legend...tha mind has been stimulated ova this piece heyah and i must say, that this is such delicious (yeah, delicious...that is what i said) love poetry that i long to see mo comin' from you, dear poet. very well written, as well as, enjoyed to say tha least.

    ~~~mindwavesoflovepoetry~~~
     
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