Black Poetry : A'****'shun

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  1. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have this
    addiction
    an irie affliction
    that constantly
    keeps me
    on this mission
    one sided vision
    cause peripherally
    I can't see
    straight enough
    to make
    rational
    decisions
    take precaution
    cause I make provisions
    to hit
    garden tools
    heifers
    and pigeons
    no contraditions
    just premonitions
    guaranteed
    by who ...ya'll women
    I got an addiction
    with no restrictions
    I take all incoming
    applications
    chasing
    traces of
    perfumes
    young things in bloom
    with pretty
    and eager faces
    It's like a religion
    this here addiction
    got me praying
    for my next laying
    my next spraying
    my next filet'n
    my next oratorical
    slaying

    pure intuition
    this fine addiction
    like country fried chicken
    lips for licking
    sopping up ladies
    like biscuits and gravy
    like tits to a baby
    I'm fit for the NAVY!

    I got
    an addiction
    some say it's sexy
    some say it's cool
    and some say freaky
    make some of ya'll
    wanna meet me
    make none of ya'll
    wanna keep me
    this **** addiction
    got me wishing
    why I live life's
    horried isms
    sometimes envision
    myself free
    to make
    a responsible decision
    when I get out of PRISON

    and return to taking what I been missing...

    A'****'SHUN


    :eek:
     
  2. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin this one and especially this line
    "make some of ya'll
    wanna meet me
    make none of ya'll
    wanna keep me"
    tight flow you better be carefull though
    write on poet
    oh and i answered to your question in that poem
    you replyed to
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!! strong statement made loud & clear
     
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    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i read it four times....thought provoking is a weak statement of my feelings about this scribe...

    dirty south tyte -
    dee
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do yo thang Brothaman!!

    I feel ya!!
     
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    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DAMNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!

    WORDS ESCAPE ME. THIS IS SUPATIGHT. KEEP IT COMIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm with Dee... I can't say nothin
    strong enough to describe what I'm feelin.
    Just know it was felt! :)
     
  8. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you hit it loud and strong with this one...
    it does make me think.
    -7:spinstar:
     
  9. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brotherman,

    Hella tight vibe!!!

    Do yo thang dawg....

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  10. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, Yall!! I tried to hit'cha with shock value -dat was the intent. Glad noone looked at me funny. Thanks again for tuning in. Ya'll just don't know what ya'll do to me in rhyme! Love.