Black Poetry : A Secret....

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  1. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have a secret to tell
    of eyes that consume me
    and a body crafted
    by the finest of artisans
    her smile melts my soul
    and with just a touch
    she sends me to heaven
    I'd find her so perfect
    if not for her flaw
    and I want to tell her everything
    but how can I say the words
    when she just sits there
    looking like a pigtail puppet
    nodding her head oblivious
    because with all of her gifts
    she never learned to use it
    unable to comprehend
    I would give her my world
    if she knew what to do with it



    Infrequently Soulful.....
    Archival
     
  2. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    wow....... feeling this!

    wow.. wow.. wow....... I feel like I wrote this that's how much I understand your words!!!!!!
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sitting on the edge of forever, and she doesn't know how to let you in. Wow. This was awesome.
     
  4. 4EVERLUV

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    Archival:
    It is so nice to read you again.
    I luv your joint. Too bad she
    doesn't know what to do with
    your world....
    Very, very nice write.


    Much Luv
     
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    Hi Archival
    What a beautiful secret you are sharing.
    Can't help but smile, because
    I can feel your smile in this poem.
    If only she knew
    Peace~N~Love
     
  6. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well thanks everyone.

    Miss Lady, I often get that same feeling when I drop in on this place. So many words shared I could swear I wrote myself.....

    Watzinaname, I'll keep at it for now, maybe she'll clue in :).

    4everluv, it's nice to drop by every now and again. Nicer still is knowing someone such as yourself will be here to see it. We've had some good times here and I still seek out your name in the pile when I'm here.....

    Bluewater, :qqb003: appreciate the words, spoken and unspoken.

    Infrequently Soulful...
    Archival
     
  7. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smh....It hard when a person is incompetent ....especially when the dear heart is involved
    :10200: Bro
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    hmm

    maybe they might know what to do

    maybe let the secret out

    peace
     
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