Black Poetry : A Secret Place

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  1. CasualFriday

    CasualFriday Member MEMBER

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    A Secret Place

    This world seems cruel and cold
    and pain doth pierce my very soul
    but there's a secret place
    a place where I can go

    A place where love abides
    where justice reigns and God resides
    there is a place a secret place
    a place where I can go

    For you shall hide me in your tabernacle
    from the rain and storm
    and even when my enemies pursue me
    you keep me safe from harm

    And when my heart is filled with pain
    no peace it seems I'll find again
    I find that place a secret place
    that place where I can go

    For you shall hide me in your tabernacle
    from rain and storm
    and even when my enemies pursue me
    you keep me safe from harm

    There is safety in your tabernacle
    there is protection
    there is security
    there is sanctuary

    Lord take me to your tabernacle
    I wanna go to your tabernacle
    Lord take me to your tabernacle
    for there you reign
    Lord take me in your dwelling place
    there is a secret place
    a place where I can go.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome

    welcome to destee.com postic playground
    welcome to the family of love & peace
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    very nice flow happy u join us in scribe ......
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    it struck me...tabernacle. the word you used..
    went to thoughts of your religion.. and what denomination you are...AND
    i agree...a secret place...to be...
    a secret place to see...
    very nice flow...
     
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    Gonna make me get some old time religion up in here! Peaceful scribe. Keep it up!
     
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    :wave:
    wlecome to destee.com
    nice smooth and calm flow
    enjoyed it!!!
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    This was very peaceful and inviting. I felt this scribe. Welcome to Destee, poet.
     
  7. CasualFriday

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    Thank U

    Thank you all for your response. Venturing out for the first time can be a little scary, but I decided to just let it flow and to go for it.


    CASUALFRIDAY
     
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    "Casual Friday" :) welcome :wave: :wave: this was lovely indeed
    So glad to have you here with us :)
    share love and give love to recieve love and may the poetic love grow :)
     
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