Black Poetry : A Second Chance

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  1. themac46

    themac46 Active Member MEMBER

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    A SECOND CHANCE
    By Themac46

    Who am I

    I enter into this relationship
    Clean and full of grace
    And all before me was mine
    To put on my plate

    Who am I to have a second chance

    I wondered for years
    Happy and care free
    Until something whispered
    That made me say gee.

    Who am I to have a second chance

    Following the whisper,
    Like a petal in the breeze
    Trying to go higher and higher
    Going this way and that
    Never becoming at ease
    None the wiser, and never having all the facts.

    Who am I to have a second chance

    But like a petal without a breeze
    I came tumbling down
    Towards the ground
    Wondering were I will be bound

    Who am I to have a second chance

    Then the answer came
    Telling me that I am, and He is
    Now like petal being wash in the rain
    Again I am clean and full of grace
    Growing without pain

    Who am I to have a second chance

    I am His
    :cool:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we all deserve a second chance...

    an opportunity to learn...to grow...to go beyond the mistakes we made and see what lies over the hill.

    WELCOME

    let the river flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    misguided mistakes made

    but alwayz forgiven we all earned a second chance!
     
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    Welcome Mac....

    I'm lovin this flow, so beautifully creative
    keep em comin......:toast:


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    tight flow!

    welcome to the poetry family!

    :wave:


    pd
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Mac

    A second chance is a precious gift. Not everyone takes advantage of it's opportunity or even recognize it. I'm glad you did and glad you are here.

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    To all that posted a reply so far, I would like to thank all for the encourging words.

    In and way this is also a second chance to let me use my mine for something good and creative

    Again Thanks to All

    :rolling: :rolling:
     
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    Encouraging

    How good it is to have a second chance?
    Lovely~
    Desert Storm
     
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