Black Poetry : A Rush of Lust

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  1. Harry Hyman

    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Rush of Lust

    I was caught in an orgasmic rush of Lust
    that burned my soul into ashened dust.
    It gripped like a current plummetting within
    as blood cells roasted in sizzling Sin.
    Hot images flipped thru my mind like pages.
    Nerve endings fired with synaptic rages.
    Breath was shortened 'til there was hardly none.
    I gasped for air in each Love stunned lung.

    My veins expanded for blood in and out.
    Nostrils flared for the oxygen drought.
    My pores burst open to release the sweat
    that would cool the body's pulsing jets.
    My temperature felt to be one hundred and seven
    where convulsions occur enroute to Love heaven.
    I was spellbound caught in this majestic rapture
    that all men and women must yield to capture.

    Being caught just once is all that's needed
    to prime this yearning with a need to feed it.
    And such appetite Urge of sacred distinction
    is Man fighting back from the edge of extinction
    on an arc of passion burning far and wide
    that bends towards peace when its fire subsides
    to wait in the high grass for that pelvic thrust
    in the pounce of the panther in a rush of Lust.
    Whew !

    Namyh
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The way you specifically took us through each fiery physical manifestation, wow, whew is right. Intense write poet.
     
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    Wat'chu tryna do Harry!?!:)

    Watz,
    My sentiment exactly!!


    I dig the way this came down.

    Be Blessed!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    a helluva chemical reaction :em0100:

    can't be mad at this one. nice work.
     
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    Oh My Harry:
    That lust sounds like it was tryn to
    take you out of here....lol I love to
    read you its like reading picture in picture.
    Nice steamy flo...


    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaa! u mastered the moment what a rush of heat right here
     
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    HArry....what in tha world, are you trying to do, to a young sistah like me, huh? Excuse me for being forward....but I am licking the floor off of your words....you got any sons my age? he he he.....shoooot. sizzling sin mmmmmMmmmm

    Man, if you dont go to someone a get a book deal.....you cant keep talent like that a secret.

    Think of all the ladies who are missing out!! Hate to be THEM!
     
  8. Harry Hyman

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    Waz – We can write about the Spiritual. We can even talk about the Rational. I just wanted to put a “whew!” in the Physical. Hope it worked. Thanks Waz. Namyh
     
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    Coco – Love your sentiments exactly too. I hope this put a “whew” in your day like in mad love which gives that rush, sister Coco. Namyh
     
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    (j’hiah) – Boom! If that doesn’t put a smile on ya that dissolves the mad, nothing will. Glad you liked. Namyh
     
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