Black Poetry : A rose without thorns

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A rose without thorns….
    Drapin down…half alive…
    I cant stand straight…
    No matter how hard I try…
    Rain pours from above…
    The heart full of love…
    No one real to give it too…
    Taught.......
    it was betta ta give…
    So when will I receive…
    Fakes liars and losers
    Its what I pull…
    The stars disappeared and
    The sun lost it shine…
    But who really cares …
    Its my life not to worry you..
    My blues
    A weepin rose…
    who lost its true color…
    no one seems to pick me…
    but the rest always go..
    and a new bloom starts….
    But I am still here..
    Sittin….and
    watchin
    wishin …and
    yearnin…
    But I know I will never bloom
    and no one……
    Will ever notice the true
    love from me..
    snow will fall and I still be here….
    In da cold all alone….
    A rose without thorns….

    a true blkangel thang.......
    ;)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    can i have this rose .....
    i like dis scribe
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    will u take care of it
    make sure it grows...
    can you give it love
    and help it grow...
    will you cherish it...
    as it blooms for you....
    feed its soul...so it will shine...
    will you hold on we it tries ta fade....
     
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    give it life i can do
    my love will shine through
    i can make it grow
    within da beauty
    this rose of love i know of
    yes i can love it right
    yes i can make it right
    yes i can give it tender care
    yes i water it with my soul
    and cherish it forever hold
    so may i have it ?
     
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    ooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh this is so poignant and beautifully expressed. I am picking you, girl. You are my rose of a friend. :) (and I do water regularly and talk to you, hee hee)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$...yes you may...
    have...dont destory it now....
    it will bloom forever more....
    love it
    hold it
    cherish it
    and
    water its soul...
    and it will shine....bright

    gempis...you made me laugh..lol..you pick me
    well i tell you no friend like a good friend....much love my big sister
    glad to have you as a friend...

    thanks fo da read....yall know yall made my day...
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A rose without thorns heart full of love… what more could a man ask for.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hodee...who knows but thanks fo da read...hugz
     
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    Tyte flow.
     
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    Picked roses wither and die becuz they have no roots.

    A rose left to be is treasured and admired,

    Becomes peoples gift to be desired.

    I'd rather have a rose that lives its entirety blooming season after season than one whose petals wilt and fall, causing the rose to be a stem.

    Eventually, others will see the beauty in that rose's existance and wish that they preserved the several roses they picked and lost.

    Peace.
     
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