Black Poetry : A RIVER OF PASSION

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  1. DA BROTHER LOVE

    DA BROTHER LOVE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A river of passion…

    On this night, allow your soul to be free…
    Watch, as your reality suspends into the air, and your mind takes hold of forbidden fantasies….
    While you are debating on whether you should hold back and keep your feelings inside,
    Allow me to release those distractions of nervousness and tension with assuring replies…
    Your mind now begins to open to the kind of ecstasy you have found only in erotic dreams….
    I can sense a burning soul that yearns to sing, a repressed heavenly body that silently wants to scream.
    Clouds are dissolved, feelings of hurt and pain set free.
    Open your soul, as I give you all that I have within me, our mouths begin to discover each others crevices gently…
    We innocently exhale to each other a language that finishes each others sentences,
    Simply….
    Use your tongue to caress mine, as your excitement pleasantly burns me….
    We trade kisses, from lips that send us into the endlessness heights of eternity….
    I can hear your soul inside, it begins to make the most intimate of sounds, and it seems like you are ready for me….
    Hear yourself sigh as rough, but gentle, hands tenderly massage you, head to feet…
    As I’m rubbing your toes, I can feel you glance at me, with a love that is pleasantly sweet….
    Every so slowly, a hand of affection slides from leg to thigh…
    Every so brightly, rivers of passion flow gracefully through your eyes.
    Can you feel our attraction? Are you fully aware of what is about to transpire?
    A sensual fellowship has begun; behold an intimate feast of flesh….
    Hold tight, as I carefully remove any clothes that are left….
    Jeans and panty hose drop below, shirt and bras pass over head…
    Feel my warmth for you, as I delicately move my fingers through the smoothness of your hair….
    Let me whisper my love for body into your ear, just to let you know I care….
    Lay your head back, as I softly move my warm tongue down your chest….
    Feelings of stimuli activate, from nipple to breast…
    My tongue falls vertically, as your bosoms elegantly catch me….
    Saliva moves from mouth to breast, as your pores eagerly snatch me….
    Hands lovingly move thru my head, as I begin to breast feed….
    Exploration continues as I move from chest to tummy….
    Tummy to belly…
    Belly to…
    To…
    Jelly.
    A sizzling tongue moves to taste the sweet nectar hidden between moist lips….
    A wet snake penetrates the heavenly gates, located between voluptuous hips….
    Close your eyes and imagine, as my tongue of passion gently rocks your cradle…
    Relax your legs as my wind of desire slowly develops from storm to tornado..
    Your body responds in thrill, your lips start to drip little ponds of the sweetest honey….
    The soul begins to quiver out a moan of delight that pierces my ears so keenly..
    Thighs begin to shake in anticipation as your body is ready to receive me.
    Let your lungs exhale, as I stick my log into your beaver, with the greatest ease.
    A gentle scream…
    My body is flooded with anxiety, yet I exhibit precise control,
    You grab onto me, as I take you on this sexual rollercoaster that starts off slow,
    Establishes a strong rhythm, then gains tempo….
    Sexual fulfillment calls from deep within your soul, as that place between your thighs awaits an answer….
    You once again begin to run your fingers through my hair, moaning... panting passionately, as my pelvis begins to grind faster.
    Close your eyes, as your mind starts to flood with mental pictures of ecstasy….
    Take hold, as this feeling begins to comfort the depths of your soul, like pleasant childhood feelings and memories,
    Visions of this sexual journey are instantly photographed into your mind as I guide you…
    Gently…
    Ever so Gently….
    Into this seemingly religious breakthrough that has occurred,
    You experience the fascinating phenomenon that has existed for centuries….
    Through your body, a sense of the deepest peace, and at the same time sheer pandemonium, is pleasantly carried….
    Blissful emotions are felt, through the release of all pain that was once buried…
    In this moment of paradise, you are but a footstep away from the home of eternity….
    And I will be there with you the whole way, as you begin to experience the pleasure of the highest satisfaction….
    The eyes of your orgasm begin to cry rivers of passion.
     
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    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *hums the tune of Sexual Healing while belly dancing* :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And this passionate river is simply overflowing. Such descriptive verse leaves the reader spent. Bravo poet, take a well deserved bow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da passion flowing in a down pour here
    this was very nice let da river run nice drop!
     
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    this was smooth.....

    The eyes of your orgasm begin to cry rivers of passion

    ok now.....speechless you posed this so well

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    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If i could take a bat in such river.... :devil:
     
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    Da Brother Love ... oh my oh my oh my ... it's been too long since i've ventured up here into the poetry forum ... but uhhh ... is this what we doin now ??!!! :eeek:

    Well ... all i can say to this peace is that i don't know how to swim but i'm oh so ready to jump in da river!

    Great Work! Whew!

    Nice to have you with us!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  8. DA BROTHER LOVE

    DA BROTHER LOVE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *takes a bow* thanks im glad yall enjoyed it.... i wrote it while i was think about this girl.... we was used to have some good times.... god i miss her
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    dear da brotha love..
    the name suits you from that erotic poem...and i bet you miss her..
    i loved the metaphor of "my log into her beaver"...loved it...
     
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