Black Poetry : A Revelation In Poetic Missive Form/unavailable 2 Me Face 2 Face

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  1. SAARONCROWELL

    SAARONCROWELL Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MY soon 2 b lover.....

    After staring lovingly into one another's eyes~
    For what seems like an emotional eternity...
    You lean slowly forward, gently cup my face~
    Within the firm grasp of your two velvety hands...
    So as to place, ever so delicately..your lips against my lips~
    Sharing with me a kiss so tender, that...
    Arrows of unbridled joy~
    Cascade throughout my very soul!

    And..as the momentum from the magnitude of~
    Your kiss....allows my mind to return to it's own hemisphere...
    Breathlessly is how I await your next ploy~
    For no man could possibly...
    Feel as desired as you make me feel~
    Right here, right now!

    Tell me,..I whisper into your slightly parted mouth~
    Tell me how to touch you...
    So that you will experience that realm~
    Above and beyond the savoir faire...
    You are giving me~
    Until, the barriers that restrain your soul...
    Are removed, and you allow my love to flow~
    Into you, unencumbered, like sunshine through a beveled
    glass window!

    And therefore, from the goosebumps I expect will be prevelent~
    I shall thereby attempt to read them, here in this darkness...
    In Braille-like fashion, mapping out a course of physical contact~
    Hoping not to misinterpret whatever message is gleaned...
    Wondering aloud~
    Just how I got to be so **** lucky!

    Until, that is, I awaken to discover~
    My HEART, smoldering within my chest...
    As the embers of my anticipated reality~
    Became the nightmarish realization, that you wanted...
    Not me! The one capable of doing for you~
    But ANYONE else, from California to New York...
    Able to supply you with a wet ***~
    And not one thing more!

    Harsh? Maybe, yet the fact of the matter is~
    Although you whispered/professed love for me....
    You NEVER really did, it was only the love of what I could/would
    do for you~
    That served me up like a 7 course meal...
    Of which you partook and took and took~
    While giving nothing in return, but teases and empty promises...
    Knowing all of the while, that any phone call made by you~
    Was indeed, an invitation to the junction of your thighs!

    Not extended of course, to unworthy ME loving YOU~
    That would've been too much like right...
    As I was not amongst~
    The guests on that extensive list!

    So now, with my heart formally broken~
    I return to my shell...
    Mortally wounded, from having given too much, too soon~
    Whilst NEVER receiving ANYTHING in return...
    For time, for effort~
    And/or emotions expended!

    Momentary bliss, like fast money~
    Is gone all too soon..with no accountability...
    I sincerely hope that you're happy now~
    And, I pray that YOU never experience this degree of SADNESS!
    Oh yeah,...GOOD-BYE!!!

    SAARONCROWELL
    (C) 1970* all rights reserved

    *for Gladys...and all of the other women in my life...past, present,
    and future..that may think as she once did!
    p.s.
    to paraphrase .DR TREGGE, if you see yourself,...SMILE!!
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SAARONCROWELL - Dayuum bro!!!!

    There you go with these long *** joints but you'll hear no complaints from me...this **** was bangin'!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ditto...

    you drop in and out...for seconds at a time...leaving us with food enuff to sustain us during your absence. THANKS for the bread and wine, my brutha. TYYGHT.
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I thoroughly

    appreciate your thoughtful treatment of all subjects...you come real at all times...

    and I enjoy the skillful way you flow what we all need to know

    thank you for this, brotha.

    a
     
  5. poeticdelight

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    Saccro Is A Big Player.. LOL

    it's all love here


    pd
     
  6. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No doubt PD!!!

    no doubt!!

    Saaron...you hitten em hard man. Keep it real...as you always do!
     
  7. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa!
    as i was reading this velvety
    love scene i was DOUSED
    with ice cold water...
    thanks for the reality and vividry!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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