Black Poetry : A Resolution for a Revolution

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tis the season for resolutions.
    I promise this,
    I'm going to do that.
    Well, I'm going to make a resolution
    for a revolution....
    A revolution of my mind,
    thoughts I have to alter
    attitudes I need to change
    determination, do not falter.
    A revolution of my soul
    my essence needs to be free
    I need to allow myself nourishment
    that feeds the core of me.
    A revolution of my heart,
    to leave the chamber ajar,
    enough to let love in,
    not stranded from afar.
    I resolve to make a revolution,
    a revolution of me.
     
  2. LeRoy

    LeRoy Active Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin this. Sometimes thats exactly how I feel.
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    i hear you...
    never be afraid to love
    or to fight for what's yours...word
    one love
    khasm
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Positive change is always good, thank you, LeRoy.
    Sometimes it's like that, Khasm, you've got to fight for what you know...thanks for your response.
     
  5. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname,
    Nicely scribed, revolution in deed. i really like the way you were blessed to bring this.

    Peace and Blessings
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice write...
    i feel ya on this
    Angel
     
  7. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ready 4D Revolution!

    Deep Unique Introspective Scribe

    Write On!
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for considering me blessed to bring this, Rasheed.
    Glad you're feeling this, mzblkangel, thanks.
    Mawwlulu1 thanks for seeing this as a unique scribe that you can appreciate.
     
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