Quiet Poetry Lounge : a request

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bert, Aug 8, 2002.

  1. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was looking through
    the photo album again
    I swore I wouldn't do this
    time only helps
    me remember what a
    fool what a fool what a fool
    I was

    There you are behind the
    plastic, preserved by time
    smiling at me

    In that wicked green polka dot
    bikini...

    oh girl! When I saw you
    the other day
    I realized how more beautiful
    you've become
    and how your smile still
    does things...in me

    wondering if you changed
    inside you
    and if you're only living
    and doing things you
    have to do

    Inside my eyes
    I rub my fingers down
    curves of your breasts
    down your hips
    and my hands get warm
    as I feel your nubian
    perfection
    surrounding my
    extreme erection

    I thought I'd put away
    these memories
    but every now and then
    you come out to tease
    my mind

    oh girl! Can we?
    Just one more time?

    Bert
     
  2. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sounds like a decent enough request...I'm sure the answer depends on what kind of memories she has of you. hmmmm

    nice flow, though

    Shade
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most def a beautiful request is she has the same thoughts
    seem like a fullfillment on the riase....$R
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MMMMMMMMM I can feel your longing for your girl, as your words ignite my longing for my old friend.
     
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    I feel this to the fullest....
    I too have the same feelings for someone in my past
    I wished it would've last
    thank you for bringing some beautiful memories back...
     
  6. LiLi

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    oh ****! reads like lyrics and i must admit when i reached this:

    "Inside my eyes
    I rub my fingers down
    curves of your breasts
    down your hips
    and my hands get warm
    as I feel your nubian
    perfection
    surrounding my
    extreme erection"

    i almost fell outa my chair!

    this is great!!
     
  7. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Poets

    your responses are a wonderful boost, and buffer.

    Bert
     
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