Black Poetry : A Request: For Red Lady!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by klabarron, Nov 14, 2002.

  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Lover’s Smile

    She smiled, drawing me into her most solitary dwelling
    Brightest ray of sun, envies her glow
    Beauty of the summer’s daises, succumbs to the fragrance
    emitted in an instant
    for she has smiled.

    She smiled again, and i came to know her.
    Full of life
    Full of genuine, unconditional love
    Touching my world without hand
    she smiled

    Again she smiled, atop my body prostrate
    Sharing all of her in her smile
    An all encompassing smirk of passion
    Erases my cares
    I dwell, as she smiles at me
    In her ecstasy
    In passion
    And I loose me
    For she
    Has become my most solitary dwelling
    And a simple smile
    Invades my face
    As she loves me
    Like only she can.
    With a simple smile.


    Ok Red - there's some love!!!:love:
     
  2. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dis is very sweet. I'm pretty sure redlady is going to luv dis here.

    Aaliyahmonet:)
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm overwhelmed with all this luuuv poetry...
    this flow is warm and lovely! :spinstar:
     
  4. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just had to show you guys that brother ain't ALL ANTI-!!!
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aiiiighttt! aaaaaiiiighhhhtttt!
     
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    klabarron, I feel so much better now! Thank you! A little too much darkness was hitting Redlady earlier, but now I feel all warm and comfy again.

    Thanks.
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let it shine! let it shine!!!!!
     
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