Black Poetry : A Rapture

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A rapture
    Enraptured
    in your....
    Loving embrace
    of our people's struggle
    your saving grace
    protecting those whom
    you feel kinship to
    from the motherland
    it emanates from within you
    and spreads throughout
    everything you touch
    the gift of comforting minds
    and souls, you give so much
    until it must hurt, deep inside
    just one mesmerizing touch
    is all it takes, and one is indeed
    taken, for life. Could it be
    that everyone feels your aura?
    Or is it only me?
    A being so spiritual and strong,
    he makes you see all the good in you,
    so you forget all about the wrong,
    you are like a rhapsody in blue
    a glorious, intriguing song
    sent from God above
    I am only human, how could I
    possibly ignore a song from a dove?
    A tune that anyone would long to hear?
    So go on and croon my dear,
    for you are a rapture.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this here took me for a ride deep inside
    what a flow and eye opener of rapture
    of whom so feel dis was laid sweet and real
    tyte write sista watz
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Happy to know that you were taken in by the depth of this flow from the heart. Thank you brotha.
     
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    likewise my dear likewise .................
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa sister, this is magical. Flow on!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate you saying so gempis, thank you.
     
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    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin' every line of that piece!! U did it again!! Beautiful work
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for letting me know you're feeling this piece nabraska.
     
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    :) gee sister to refer to someone as a "rapture" :)
    sweet
    how uplifting
    like a beacon of hope in a dim dismal world
    I love the concept my sister
    props to the pen and the artist within :)
     
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