Black Poetry : A raise out of....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I had my share of
    The wind that took me
    On a no return ride
    And I had no where to turn
    Couldn’t run just trap
    Lost and confused
    As my tears burn inside
    Nothing of love or that support
    Within the comfort
    Hurting and lonely
    I stop reaching and striving
    Got tired of being strong
    Tears burn inside
    Disappointment after disappointment
    As it crashed down like a storm
    That builds up….
    And wipes the ground
    Knocks trees over
    Threw me like a branch
    After hitting the wall
    In to a flood and I couldn’t swim
    Got tired of being strong
    When I looked inside to find me
    It was no one there

    My love my sweet love
    ……….My sweet love
    I never knew dayum
    How sweet the love could be
    How my life have changed
    Part of me is you
    No longer lost...for you
    Came in and took my hand
    And help me through the storm
    Walking that path with me
    For the first time
    I can breathe with ease
    Made me believe again as
    Two holding on to something real
    And growing a tender fantasy
    A meaning of a meaning
    My love he embraced
    And took me as I was…
    Who would of thought?
    Dayum I can cry for the depth of him
    Is me…..and I feel good
    As my heart shouts of joy
    Once was scared to reach out
    Had got use to being without
    Now its time for me to see
    Because I need….I want
    and deserve....
    ............and now I have

    I love you baby...

    (c) Poetry Paradise by an Angel
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u alwayz blow me away with ya poetry...nice flow...
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Mz Blk Angel...

    Absolutely beautiful. I see the growth in your poetry...and I love it. :D

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts of his effect with us.

    :toast:
     
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    Humbleness. Sometimes a person can express themselves with such deepness, and from that expression, it can humble the on looker or the reader. This flow has brought about such humbleness.

    Thank you for the drop!
    It is beautiful!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a lovely peaceful write, I liked the way you flowed with this.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My, my, my ...this piece almost sent me into orbit with you, you laid this out quite well, it moved me greatly.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the love and support.....Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was juist beautiful
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    somebodyyyyyyyyy is in LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE :read:
    hehehe
    :read:
    MmmmmHmmmmm
    lemme see
    uh huh :read:
    uh huh :read: :look:
    ooookay hehehe
    sister i think it is WONDERFUL that you have found a love to be your muse :)
    simply beautiful :)
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love Rich .....QQn trin shhhhsh u talking to much again...:lol:

    Angel
     
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