Quiet Poetry Lounge : A Quiet Storm

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  1. NDeep

    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The rods of passion and fire have cracked the sky
    And from deep within me a moan shakes the ground,
    And I cry.....
    The fruit of my condensation burst fervently from my heart
    It softly caresses the back of Night
    Drops down the fancy of lush underbrush
    Plays with the moon which has risen from an orange,purple, and black dusk
    Rapidly tears fall to Mother Earth
    In soothing rhythms; like beating drums
    A tiny inconvience for some
    A time for magical moments for others
    My crystal tears collect and form sacred pools
    Used for ceremonial dances performed by lovers
    And dog-blasted mud puddles for mothers
    But however one perceives it...
    A quiet storm has brewed within me.... A cloud

    And when Dawn returns
    Only honeydew remains
    And underneath dry, warm bedsheets
    Only two Souls remain
     
  2. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Those two lines........
    Boy those two lines did something to me.....
    Simply magnificent this was and you are.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet moment of tyme in the quiet times of two
     
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    NDeep

    As we lay
    I'm blown away
    Contemplating...
    Mastery

    Well done!


    :toast:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    captured this very well nice very nice

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so deep and so nice... made my soul yearn for such bliss... keep doing your thing NDeep. nuff love to you!
     
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    Makes my soul weep in rememberance of love that was made.
     
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