Black Poetry : A Prostitute's Thoughts

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  1. sexe1

    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you touch me
    with your soft but firm hands
    It brings erotic thoughts to mind
    and takes me to an erotic play land
    As you caress my breast
    and gently scratch my back
    It sends shivers down my spine
    and like an untamed horse I act
    Rubbing, pulling, and touching
    more intense than each time before
    Caressing my lips that do not smile:eek:
    makes me want you even more
    Slipping on protection
    our eyes make a connection
    as you slide gently
    into my sensual section
    I Scream--and gently call out your name
    the heat of passion has you too overwhelmed
    and to me you say the same
    all this smooth and gentle action
    has given me a natural high
    It has never felt this good before
    and out of happiness I begin to cry
    The strokes become more intense
    as toward our climax use start to climb
    I scream while the ultimate feeling comes
    reaching our peak at the same time
    I shiver...you shake
    it's the best we've both had
    clinging as you pick me up
    and lay me down in our candlelit bath
    As I wash your back
    in turn you wash mine
    with the music playing softly
    we begin to slow wine
    We exit the tub
    back to the bed where we lay
    Cuddle up and intertwine
    until the light of day

    When I awake
    there's no one there
    just $100
    and my favorite teddy bear
    Danm, I feel used
    with tears in my eyes :(
    but I remember that's it's a job
    night after night....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DAYUMMMMMM!!!

    erotic work force.....night after night !
    who can down play the erotic bliss of a true trick !
    gurl u hit me like a storm wit dis one had my mouth
    hangin wide open:jawdrop:
     
  3. sexe1

    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx love for the compliment
    you are always appreciated
    :eek:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    LIKEWISE

    My dear Queen likewise:D
     
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    Hey sexe........

    I like this........taking us into the mind of a prostitute, by way of a climactic end.....well done.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is deeeeeeeeeeep! well done.

    blak
     
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    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich...Epiphany...Blakverb....

    Thank you so much for taking
    the time to feel my work.
    Thanks for the feedback...
    it is always appreciated
     
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    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cindy,

    Thanks for the compliment,
    it is greatly appreciated.
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is indeed

    well done....

    thank you sista!

    a
     
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    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce,

    Thanks for the words...
    they are appreciated.
     
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