Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, Oct 25, 2008.
man u not alone from this stand point
this is the tale of an american black male
yes i myself NO i'm not alone in this thanks $$$RICH$$$
what we do with it is the question
you are going to rise and take what's yours
or continue to play victim
Was the enemies part meant for me?? ...well, just in case it was
However, if I was included in "bless my friends part ...then take this instead
wonderful piece poet!
What I got from this is that even when the chips are down you appreciate what you do have, making the most of it as best you can. Keep forging ahead So'ja.
Enjoyed this intiguing piece. Definitely got to accent the postive in the midst of the turmoil. Excellent write poet.
WoW brotha DSS
Always such honest writes from you
And aptly so... you have a story to tell
Speak on my brother
see Queen if you didn't beat on me so much
you wouldn't have to worry about "enemies"
that's Street Knowledge 101
thank you poets
sista WATZ- it's do or die the rules of the universe are simple but yet so complex thank you sis
ASP - thank you for feeling the intrigue, yes you must stay focused but what to focus on is where one might lose focus
TRINITI424 - thank you but my story is your story everybody has a story
and some have battle scars to go with the story
whether those scars be physical, mental or spiritual
Thanks for this post
Da Street So'ja
" what we do is the question? "
LOVING OUR WOMAN
CLAIMING ALL THAT WAS ONCE LIKE A REBORN MAN
BRING ALL THAT IS REAL
GIVING FIRST BACK TO OUR WOMENTHE PRIDE WE LONG DESERVE
HEALING PRAISE THEY DESERVE
THEY SAY THEY NEED
WHAT EVER THEY SAY
THEY WANT TO OWN
I WILL BE ONE OF MANY FRONT MEN!
STANDING IN READY.
DOING THE GROUND WORK
MOVING WITH THE GRACE
QUICKNESS OF A SPARROW
IN WILL AND COURAGE
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