Black Poetry : A Premonition of Exhilaration

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  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have a new ambition
    An exciting new aspiration
    Establishing a brand new mission
    From a new source of inspiration

    I have watched, I have listened
    And, gathered suitable information
    Now, I have some intuition
    To step beyond mere infatuation

    She has an intriguing disposition
    That strengths this stimulation
    Becoming a profound cognition
    A remarkable fascination

    Yet there are some conditions
    She’s holding some reservations
    She has explained her position
    I understand her hesitation

    So I’ll make a proposition
    Clearly define my expectations
    Then I’ll wait for her permission
    Despite my natural inclination

    For I feel this premonition
    That after some procrastination
    I will be gaining acquisition
    Thus gain tremendous exhilaration
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello arthur:
    As always its so nice to read you.
    Your scribe made me smile as I too
    and feeling such Exhilaration these days.
    Isn't it WONDERFUL! Your rhyme scheme
    is perfecto. Thanks for the smile:)


    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome return wit a well fitting exhilaration......tyte scribe
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    May you obtain the exhilaration you seek. I agree with 4everluv, your rhyme scheme was amazing, another wonderful write poet.
     
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