Black Poetry : A PRAYER pt.1

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rapchild, Sep 18, 2006.

  1. rapchild

    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wrote this years ago did a few changes but is still can be compared 2 the stuff i write now.
    so please is old.thank u.


    Lord i was lost n i got found in jesus name
    Lord i've been foolish n got lost once again
    Lord u have touched so many hearts n done so many things
    that i cant explain
    but once u have done it 4 other peeps
    i know u will surely do it 4 me
    Lord i have waited for and still waitin 4 my blessin
    n i accept life n its stuggles cuz i believe every bad situation is a lesson
    Lord im not perfect
    so come to u 4 help
    Lord i know i was blessed at birth
    im still waitin 4 ur blessin
    im waitin 4 that day
    i will succeed in everything i do n will not fail
    the day i will be able 2 rise above everythin n touch the moon
    Lord i hope,pray n wish that day comes soon
    in the name of the FATHER,the SON and the HOLY SPIRIT i pray
    AMEN.
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rapchild,
    Welcome to our unitedness..make yourself at home.
    I enjoyed reading your piece and hope to see much, much more.
    Thanks for sharing a piece of your world.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    Every and any prayer is A-1 this was beautiful
    welcome again to the family Rapchild
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes we don't see quite where our blessings flow, but, they do. This was a beautiful prayer, and, welcome.
     
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    i love to pray. praying is my thing despite what i might write about. i know that through will all things be new. i like when someone acknowledges what our father does. flo on poet.
     
  6. rapchild

    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u

    that was luv all the things u say here
    luv n nuttin else
    GOD bless y'all.
     
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