Black Poetry : A Prayer (haiku)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kitana, Dec 3, 2001.

  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    please let me be free
    she prayed~as the whip cut deep
    and the Lord answered

    (c)nfn 2001
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's beautiful

    how the lord works in wayz unknown & untouchable
    loved it sis......:heart: :kiss:
     
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    Kitana...oh gurl...silent
    Gurl...this is heart wrenching beautiful. I truly thank you for posting this jewel. Had it not been for Rich...you would not even gotten a reply. This one slip past me, but today my life is richer because of this haiku. You painted a vivid image in your haiku. I felt this. The more I read it, the sharper the horrific image became. This haiku is a stark reminder of the price "prayed" in order that one might finally be free.


    Your sister in poetry...Joyce
     
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