Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kitana, Dec 3, 2001.
please let me be free
she prayed~as the whip cut deep
and the Lord answered
how the lord works in wayz unknown & untouchable
loved it sis......
Gurl...this is heart wrenching beautiful. I truly thank you for posting this jewel. Had it not been for Rich...you would not even gotten a reply. This one slip past me, but today my life is richer because of this haiku. You painted a vivid image in your haiku. I felt this. The more I read it, the sharper the horrific image became. This haiku is a stark reminder of the price "prayed" in order that one might finally be free.
Your sister in poetry...Joyce
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