Black Poetry : A Prayer for my Sister (haiku)

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She sleeps in your care
    Her needs so great, so many
    Dear God, make her well

    BE
     
  2. Maggie

    Maggie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you

    for sharing such beautiful words. God hears. He knows.

    z
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Precise Poetic Prayer

    Thank you for sharing. Prayers like this are very effective, because they are short and to the point. God is not impressed by our "many" words, but the faith we have behind the few ones uttered. Who can know how many have received their miracle thru reading or uttering...a haiku prayer.

    By faith in Jesus,
    I pray for your sister too.
    She shall rise again.




    *Writing Haiku Prayers Are Good For The Soul And Mind*
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    now this one was tight

    pd
     
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    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really liked this:eek:
     
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    So beautiful

    is your soul, Bruce.


    Your sister loves you
    The love you share is better
    Than flowers that fade


    So beautiful is your heart, Bruce.

    Thank you for this.

    a
     
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